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Poetry in motion

Last post 10-13-2008 11:34 PM by Stuart Sorensen. 1 replies.
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  • 10-08-2008 3:07 PM

    • Dez
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    Poetry in motion

    Calling all bards out there - to mark National Poetry Day on Thursday - the theme for which is 'work' - we would like to see your reflections on life working in social care. The winning post will receive some kind of prize, so get scribbling.

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  • 10-13-2008 11:34 PM In reply to

    Re: Poetry in motion

    This is a rewrite ('cause I've forgotten the original) of one I wrote a little while before I left acute psych wards. The original was better but what the Hell?

    The Acute Nurse

     

    Awestruck and a little shy

    I stood, half-hidden

    And watched the teacher passing by.

     

    At his belt hung shiny keys

    That jangled as he passed

    For all to hear, for all to see.

     

    And looking up I vowed that one day

    I would be that man

    At five years old I saw my way

    To be all that I can.

     

    Now decades later

    I’m a boy no more

    And in my hand I hold some other keys

    I'm like the man

    I saw before

    But with a real unease

     

    I’m not my brother’s keeper

    And I never hoped to be

    I’d rather be his helper

    But that’s not how it must be.

     

    So the keys still jingle in my hand

    The patients get their meds

    And remembering I wonder

    What I might have done instead?

    Cheers,

    Stuart

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